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somenamenoname
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« on: March 18, 2008, 11:28:15 PM »
Greetings,

I just finished first finished draft of an eBook I've been working on. It is a short eBook and will likely be expanded and revised some more before I release it. This is my first official eBook and I would like to get some honest feedback/suggestions so that I may improve.

Download eBook here:
http://world-mega-mall.com/promo/How%20to%20Pleasure%20Your%20Wife%20R1%20(promo).pdf

Password is:
howtopleasureyourwife

I will leave the promo eBook up for awhile. If you get a 404, the promo eBook is no longer available.

Thank you :-)
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« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2008, 06:27:50 PM »
ok,

first thing that strikes me is the title. No offense, but it reminds me mightily of the subject lines of things that land in my spam box. And since the only bit about bedroom play is at the end I would consider something else for the title since it evokes instant thoughts about bedroom play.

Just my humble opinion.

Will have to think about the content a bit more before giving opinions on that.

Lemme know if you have any particular things you want opinions on, or if it's just general opinion overall.
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« Reply #2 on: March 22, 2008, 03:26:58 PM »
yea ive been debating about changing the title but no ideas of what to call it yet.

as for opinion... anything you have an opinion on related to the ebook is fine and may prove useful
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